Term 2 writing

When my dad came back from Australia we went to a farm. The farm is where my dads Maori is. My mum wants to live out there because it is peaceful. It is nowhere near town. Higher up the mountain is my nana. She is looking after 3 of my cousins. Their names are Ryder, Kani and Sypress. It's fun going down the hill but it's tiring getting back up.

I have been working on making my writing more descriptive.

I want to improve my writing by using more adjectives.