Metaphors

Writing Term 1

WALT:  use metaphors in our writing to make it more interesting and to describe ourself better.

I used metaphors to describe myself.

Georgia is maple syrup spreaded on pancakes  at the Corner Cafe.

Georgia as buzzy as a bee on a flower collecting nectar.

Georgia is as tall as a MBA player standing big and proud.

Georgia is like a bright happy sunflower.

Georgia is sometimes as slow because she doesn't get her work finished in time.

My next step is to put a lot more metaphors in my writing a lot more often.